Silvion
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Post by Silvion on Feb 14, 2004 9:33:08 GMT -5
Guys, I need some help with this.
We flew through lightning, rain and ice,
We walked over burning meadows.
We came to the mountain where darkness lies,
and danced with Jak'o the Shadows.
We fought him through the darkest night
We saw long shadows forming
We looked up, seeing fist day light
and cheered the lord of the morning
He led us to victory when sunshine came
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The Dark One tainted Saidin
We rode on the winds of the rising storm,
We ran to the sounds of the thunder.
We danced among the lightning bolts,
and tore the world asunder.
I can't figure out the "@"sentences, any ideas?
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Tony
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Post by Tony on Feb 14, 2004 10:25:28 GMT -5
Hmmm....
He led us to victory when sunshine came
And we marched to Shayol Ghul
We battled and battled but
The Dark One tainted Saidin?
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Silvion
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Post by Silvion on Feb 14, 2004 14:00:43 GMT -5
no, it has to rime, and the battle is already done. It has to be about the dark one doing the counterstroke.
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Tony
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Post by Tony on Feb 14, 2004 14:27:01 GMT -5
He led us to victory when sunshine came
And Lews Therin rose in fame
But the Shadow had a trap hidden
The Dark One tainted Saidin
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Temanin
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Post by Temanin on Feb 14, 2004 15:45:13 GMT -5
It needs to have an abab rhyme scheme, not aabb (assuming 'hidden' and 'Saidin' rhyme, which they don't)
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Tony
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Post by Tony on Feb 14, 2004 16:29:53 GMT -5
I don't like poetry so I don't know much about it.
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Victor
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Post by Victor on Feb 14, 2004 19:33:14 GMT -5
He led us to victory when sunshine came
But Shai'tan would not give in.
With one last move to end this game
The Dark One tainted Saidin.
("Our foe" was supposed to be the Dark One's name, but Tony won't allow it to be uttered on his board.)
EDIT: Thank you. I will accept the consequences of my actions.
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Tony
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Post by Tony on Feb 14, 2004 19:34:01 GMT -5
That is WAY better than what I would have come up with.
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Silvion
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Post by Silvion on Feb 16, 2004 2:53:45 GMT -5
Great! Thank you Victor!
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Tony
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Post by Tony on Feb 16, 2004 17:22:25 GMT -5
But if Vic gets bad luck its because he named the DO. I warned him, but he didn't listen.
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Victor
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Post by Victor on Feb 16, 2004 18:00:08 GMT -5
I do not fear Shai'tan as long as the seals hold and the Dragon lives.
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Tony
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Post by Tony on Feb 16, 2004 18:48:10 GMT -5
But you could still attract his attention by naming him.
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Silvion
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Post by Silvion on Feb 18, 2004 6:45:20 GMT -5
Be that as it may, he still need'nt fear Him while hes sealed away.
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Tony
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Post by Tony on Feb 18, 2004 6:55:47 GMT -5
But you could still attract his attention!
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trem
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Post by trem on Feb 27, 2004 12:40:54 GMT -5
Yes you could. But as they said he is still sealed away. There for he can not hurt victor in any way shap or fourm.  |
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